About Old Saleswoman-Back for a Rematch

This story started out as an exercise in movement.  Although I'm an old saleswoman both chronologically and experience wise I'm an old writer only chronologically, so I like to practice aspects of writing that are traditionally difficult for writers to do well-- like move people from point A to point B seamlessly and without boring the reader to sleep.  I think I did that pretty well in this story, but it's not one of my favorites.  It was very hard to write because of all the physical movement and it is downright silly. Still I'm glad I wrote it.  It was good practice if nothing else.